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英文電子郵件範例解說 (33)
撰文者: Wayne 發表日期: February 8, 2011 – 8:46 am

本篇英文電子郵件範例主題:『尋求客戶的回饋意見』。本文是國外網路商的寄來的電郵內容,這些句型與用法常見於產業界的日常電子郵件,某些關鍵用法很實用,適合學習模仿並運用於實際場合。

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Help Us Better Serve You

Dear Wayne,

ClickBank, the premier, online marketplace for digital goods, is excited to announce that you will be hearing more from us. In an effort to provide you with valuable tips and tricks to help grow your business, you can expect to see more email from us with up-to-date information on Internet marketing.

We would also like to take this opportunity to thank you for all of your hard work and input. We strive to be the most important part of your affiliate marketing business and always appreciate any feedback or comments you’d like to send our way.

In the words of an affiliate and vendor partner:

“ClickBank is the fastest and easiest way to get started with affiliate marketing. After just a few months of promoting ClickBank products, I was making big profits. With commission splits as high as 75% for the affiliate marketer, it is much easier to succeed in this business. Thank you ClickBank!” – Byron Walker, Colorado

We hope ClickBank is also one of the most important resources in your business, and would love to have your vote on this quick two-minute survey:

http://www.surveymonkey.com/s/9M5GTQS

The outcome of this survey will be published in the Revenue Performance magazine. By completing this survey, you’ll be one of the first to see the results and will be entered for a chance to be featured in Revenue Performance magazine. Vote for ClickBank here!

translation

(版主解說)
◎ premier = first in importance, position 首位的;第一的。

◎ You will be hearing more from us = 實際使用的「未來進行式」,很值得模仿與學習,表示未來會持續接到他們的來信。

◎ provide sb with = 網友千萬不要漏掉介系詞 ‘with’。

◎ tips and tricks = 這兩個就是難兄難弟,表示訣竅與秘訣 (particular technique)

◎ input / feedback / comments = 意見、看法。這三個單字通常可以互換。

◎ be a part of sb = 成為某件事的一部份,成為某項工作的一份子。這種句型常常聽到,說話者用來表示自己很榮幸能夠參與某件事情或者協助他人完成某項工作。

◎ get started with = 開始 (某件事)。

◎ I was making big profits = 表示過去某段時間曾經賺過大錢。

◎ commission splits as high as 75% = 佣金分配高達 75 % (表示佣金的 75 % 歸 affiliate marketer)

◎ outcome = results = 結果

◎ will be entered for a chance to be featured in … = 有機會可以接受專訪。版主會將這句背起來,感覺很實用。關於英文單字 ‘feature’ 的用法請參照『英文單字 “feature” 該如何用?』。

英文句型 “will be entered for + N / to + V” 常出現,請參考下面的範例郵件:

Hello,

I have removed the credit card ending in 777 from your billing at this time. Your new card ending in 0990 will be charged for all future invoices. You have added your new card correctly. If you have any other questions, please let us know!

Your feedback is important to us. Please take a moment to rate this response. Upon doing so, you will be entered to win a $50 credit towards your account.

Best wishes,

Dwayne K.
Sales Administrator

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